Friday, 19 June 2015


Once upon a time there was a rich man and he had a beautiful daughter and her name was Ella and her dad married an ugly woman she had two ugly sisters. They called her Cinderella because she sleep by the fire. The prince was at the ball looking for an wife because he did not have one.cinderella couldn't go because her mother was making her do all the chores. Cinderella was the most beautiful women at the ball. At midnight she had to run home but her beautiful glass slipper fell off her foot. The prince took it to her home and tried it on and it fit. Cinderella married the prince.


  1. Hi josh really cool writing . The next time you do writing put more detail.
    by Zaeeda

  2. hi josh you did heaps of detail and you did amazing with your work and you keep the good work